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This would be a great Movie
Opening scene is disney-esque. Lex and Leo in the same room, sleeping in separate twin beds. It's very early in morning and yet their phones continue to pulse at uneven rates on the bed stand when...
I think the better opening scene would be on how Brosnan first started coaching at Newbury Park
Brosnan (pre-coaching), is watching TV and eating mashed potatoes. He doesn't now why, but he starts shaping the potatoes into the shape of a track. "This is important. This means something..."
NP compared to Crater HS in Oregon, which is 1/4 the size, is not really anything that crazy and Crater has had 20 years of success vs. 3.
Sure, but almost everyone seems to mysteriously flame out within a year of two or starting college… I guess that’s what doing 90 mpw in high school does to you. And I’d like to see your evidence that the Crater HS coach doesn’t recruit…
Opening scene is disney-esque. Lex and Leo in the same room, sleeping in separate twin beds. It's very early in morning and yet their phones continue to pulse at uneven rates on the bed stand when...
Leo and Lex discover cell phones and can't help but film themselves over and over again. I would like to see the numerous outtakes and editing.
NP compared to Crater HS in Oregon, which is 1/4 the size, is not really anything that crazy and Crater has had 20 years of success vs. 3.
Sure, but almost everyone seems to mysteriously flame out within a year of two or starting college… I guess that’s what doing 90 mpw in high school does to you. And I’d like to see your evidence that the Crater HS coach doesn’t recruit…
They run 55-65 at the top. So looks like they are goooooooood
NP compared to Crater HS in Oregon, which is 1/4 the size, is not really anything that crazy and Crater has had 20 years of success vs. 3.
Uhh….there’s a reason why Crater had more success…Brosnan didn’t start coaching until 2016. They placed 6th at NXN in 2018. Won nationals in 2019, 2020, and 2021. That’s 4 years of success actually.
Opening scene is disney-esque. Lex and Leo in the same room, sleeping in separate twin beds. It's very early in morning and yet their phones continue to pulse at uneven rates on the bed stand when...
When Nico enters the twins bedroom and says, "Time to get up boys!"
"Someone just messaged on instagram that neither of you haven't posted for a whole 6 hours."
Don't mistake praise for fawning or critique for intelligence. There's good reason to praise what is easily the greatest high school distance team ever in the United States.
Yes, and got to admire him, with all the glory and hype given to the others. He’s in the Ca. state meet finals. He controls his own destiny. I hope he’s not to burnt out after Bressnan overtraining him.His best race puts him right there at the end. Prediction for Appleford